Note: the actual illustrations of the totem animals are still in progress--but you can get a general feeling for how/where they are going to fit on the page.
I moved some of the content around in the frog description. I try not to editorialize too much and just stick to design, but it's inevitable that I want to throw my own two cents in...
The black bear page feels a bit too text heavy compared to the other pages. I would have more flexibility to work with the text if I moved down from a 12 pt to a 10pt font (like the "What is a Totem" sidebar), but for children this young, I don't think we should go any smaller. For the Raven and Mtn Goat booklets, I think it's okay to have smaller text and/or longer text passages.
The black text in the blue bar says:
"Mountain Goats are quite skilled at balancing on rocky ledges and can fit all four hooves on rocks as small as 2” by 6”, about the size of this blue box"
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