Less text and more fun graphics on the totem animal pages? The non-silouette (sp?) mountain goat is kina funny looking -- like it belongs in the It's a Small World Ride or in the Sound of Music.
Frog: drop "even" from last paragraph in green bar.Raven: Align text in cinquain example.Fisher: spell out NPS in first paragraph, "downed" instead of "down" logs? Fix spelling og "observation"
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Less text and more fun graphics on the totem animal pages? The non-silouette (sp?) mountain goat is kina funny looking -- like it belongs in the It's a Small World Ride or in the Sound of Music.
Frog: drop "even" from last paragraph in green bar.
Raven: Align text in cinquain example.
Fisher: spell out NPS in first paragraph, "downed" instead of "down" logs? Fix spelling og "observation"
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